Wednesday, June 14, 2006

I am feeling good that this is my 50th post on this blog. So I decided to write my own poem today.The name is 'Rebound'. All of your comments are welcome. It goes like this

I tried to forget everything about you,
I tried to forgive myself for being with you,
But after so many tries, I have just found,
The idea i.e. you, always make a rebound,
The phenomenon i.e. you, always make a rebound.

Now I am rather slow and a bit relaxed,
And I don't wanna rethink about those days,
I am only trying to regain my lost ground,
But the phenomenon i.e. you, always make a rebound.

Still thoughts of those days cross my mind,
That is a tape, I don't wanna rewind,
Everything has been healed, but I still keep a wound,
But the phenomenon i.e. you, always make a rebound.

But now I am telling you the truth,
Whatever it takes,I wanna relive those days,
I again wanna be through that phase,
Can't you and your aura be again all my around,
The phenomenon i.e. you, always make a rebound.

Now I am just killing my time,
Have been through the moments,which I can call my prime,
My heart still misses some beats to hear your sound
Because the phenomenon i.e. you, always make a rebound.
Because the idea i.e. you, always make a rebound.

3 comments:

Sindhu said...

Lovely!
The poet i.e you, always makes an impact! :)

I liked this line very much:
"My heart still misses some beats to hear your sound"

And congratulations on your half century! Lift your keyboard and wave it at us a bit?

*~mad munky~* said...

Congrats on the big 50!!! :o)

Nice work ;o)

Danielle said...

So honest. Completely self-revealing. Brave.